Sonic The Hedgehog Fan-fic: Dark the Hedgehog!

I'm too lazy to go chapter one.......
I like to make A PROLOGUE!!!!!!!!

Prologue.
"You crazy person!"Sonic shouted at Shadow."Like I wouldn't say the same thing!" he replied, that's when it happened.A Wormhole, icy and cold as winters first chill, opened up and swallowed Shadow up.Sonic smirked and walked away, "When I get through with him..."Shadow thought "it won't be pretty."

I looked outside, it was a boring night. There were no stars and the moon was gray, I was bored. "Why won't anything happened tonight!!!!!" I shouted, I darted outside and heard and heard a thud above me. "There's no roof above me.." I thought, so i climbed up on the roof and almost fell off.A hedgehog! but it had shoes and was black with red. I picked it up and got up in my old tree house, I knew it was old but I couldn't leave it outside. So I left him there for the night.

Chapter 1

I woke and made a beeline toward the tree house, and climbed up quietly.I got up there to see the hedgehog standing at the window. "AHHHHHHHHH!" I shouted and I think I fell off.

I woke up all daze and saw the face of him, I almost screamed again but he stopped me. Don't ask me how. He looked at me with puzzlement, then said "You a strange human". "You're a strange hedgehog" I replied "and you're...." "Shadow" he replied. "Wait a second..."
I reached inside my pocket and got out tons of paper folded out. I flipped through and stopped at Shadow the Hedgehog . "I've read about you, in these papers I found." I said, he was shocked... I think. He grabbed the paper skimmed through and looked at me gravely.


"Have you seen this person?", "No" , "Hey, wait have you seen this Hedgehog?" , "Uhhhh, No!" Whoooosh "Have you-AHHH!"

short

I don't do 'em VERY long

.... Dark the hedgehog?SOOOO ORGINAL.

Meh, he's right. Not really original.

Your format could use some improvement too. You'll see what I mean by format soon enough.

......... okay the name wasn't my Idea...
plus you'll find out why
and I don't make the chapters long for a reason.

I couldn't do a Sonic character plus that was the best name for that person.
If you have a better Idea I'd gladly hear it

i have a comic that might give ya ideas....TWO CHARACTERS FROM IT WERE MINE...I give credit to my Best friend,Gwen...

By the way Ken, I'm getting pictures of Slash.

Question: should I make another fan-fic?

HECK YA

okay this time (tomorrow)
I will make a fan-fic based on FUSION FALL