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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:32 pm | |
| so if you guys read my fan-fic which was a fail you'll know what I meant
I can't think of title but if you guys can, think of one
prologue I woke up to the sound of sirens. My room was on fire but also.... frozen and overgrown and flooded and beaten down by rocks. "AHHHHHHH!" I decided to scream, I tried to escape but everything was blocked I tried to break the door but it it didn't budge. I looked around when my dresser fell over on my legs I fell to the ground to see the silhouette of a person with...... too hard to think.
I woke to see three things that shocked me! Okay two. A boy that looked average, a boy with with wings on him, and a girl with a broom dancing around her. This just got interesting. | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Thu Sep 02, 2010 5:53 pm | |
| Chapter 1!
Well to find out the truth there were 4 people. the broom was held by an invisible guy! The girl then turned into me and looked at me strangely then she said "Whoa ANOTHER mimicker...." I almost screamed "Copycat!" the normal boy said "what?" she asked after she turned back. "Oh....." I said dizzily "I TOLD you this was a bad idea" the inviso-boy said. "Envy, will you SHUT UP!" the normal one said "Kane, don't make take out the knife!" he replied. "GUYS!" the winged one screamed "jeez, Jake calm down." I looked at everyone "wheres my house...my clothes...my TV....." I said in a low tone, Kane spoke up "gone."
"Well then what happened?" I asked Copycat and Envy looked at Jake "A strange radiation hit you, and now you have superpowers." I stood there blankly then I said "Yeah right, so if I think of a flood I-" then waves rushed in. "Okay maybe that was a coincidence." Copycat looked up and said "No you do and we know it, to control nature" | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:53 pm | |
| I came up with a quote for this chapter Chapter 2 "The world looks smaller once you know one another"
"Yeah right, and I'm the king of Iraq!" I said sarcastically. Jake looked at me and said "think of grass covering me" I thought for second and it happened. "Try it on Copycat or Kane" I thought about ice freezing Copycat and rain all over Kane, they both worked. "Fine, but what is you power?" I asked Kane. "I can be skilled at anything, including weapons" he said looking at Envy. He looked around then turned invisible "So, I'm guessing your power is to turn invisible?" I asked him. The air replied "And pass through anything while invisible" the he turned visible. Copycat was easy "Metamorphosis?" I asked, "Yep" she said quietly."Jake, tell me yours?" I looked at him, "Flying and to use my feather as super sharp knives."
(guys at the beginning and end of every chapter there will be a quote)
"Friendship is the biggest jewel on earth" | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:00 am | |
| Chapter 3 "Trust is a big word"
"So uh...you guys are like...13. I'm 11!" I looked at them, "almost 12" Envy said. "I don't care, where do I go to school?" I asked. "Uh, We don't..." Jake said quietly, "How can I trust you?!" I looked nervously.I backed up to the creaky door and said "I have to go..." I sighed and ran out the door.
Jake flew fast! I mean really fast and he caught me. "What the-" I said and squirmed out, "I just realized something..." I said "How did I get my powers?" Jake looked at me in shock and Kane and Copycat caught up. "We don't know, but thats why we have YOU" Kane pointed to me. I was so confused, I thought I was going to cry. I knew I shoudn't have in front of teens but I couldn't help it. I choked up and said "I'm a freak, no ones going to talk to me!" Envy materialized and said "So, I've been like this since I was 11,too" I looked at him. My eyes were starting to dry up, and finally said one more thing "How can I trust you?"
"Life is an endless labyrinth, you only have 3 tools. Hope, Compassion and Trust" | |
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Zak KING OF THE FORUM
Posts : 868 Join date : 2010-04-16 Age : 25 Location : Edited-Profanity
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:11 am | |
| Ok dude, this is good. But the first 3 chapters could be merged to make 1. I wouldn't mind a co-op work with you sometime, cuz you're at my level. | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:48 pm | |
| If you wanna, you can. I don't type long but I'm really trying to type long, but I can't stay and type for so long. So (if you get where I'm going) I'll let ya, but if you want add a character tell meh! | |
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hero2help Senior Member
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:55 pm | |
| Alright I didn't get to tell you guys but I left somewhere for a while so please Zak answer me soon!
-Hero2help | |
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Zak KING OF THE FORUM
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:53 pm | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:33 pm | |
| YES!!! Start ASAP, if you can! | |
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Zak KING OF THE FORUM
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:40 pm | |
| Prologue:
I was asleep. My room was dark, and a light breeze flew through the slightly open window. The window then shattered. I collapsed off my bed at the foot of 3 children. One kid looked average. Short, shaggy hair, t-shirt, and pajama bottoms. The other boy looked normal, except for the fact that he had falcon wings protruding from his spine, and a mask that covered his eyes. The girl wore a purple dress, high heels, and had a cute brown ponytail, and seemed to have a broom waltzing in circles around her. I glanced at the setting around me. Glass lay on the floor, and one shard stabbed in my hand. A fire burned outside, and it reached my bedroom. I couldn't think straight! What was happening?
"AAAH!" I screeched as the fire creeped closer in my direction. Then a splash of water put the whole thing out. I tilted my head, confused at what I just saw. | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:38 pm | |
| Thanks. So are you going to remake the 3 chapters I make and I make the fourth and u make the fifth?
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Zak KING OF THE FORUM
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:56 am | |
| ya-huh. And I'll be adding someone in Chapter 2 of my own | |
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hero2help Senior Member
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:34 am | |
| 'kay | |
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hero2help Senior Member
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| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Thu Oct 07, 2010 3:02 pm | |
| Zak? you there... are you done with that chapter? | |
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Zak KING OF THE FORUM
Posts : 868 Join date : 2010-04-16 Age : 25 Location : Edited-Profanity
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:55 pm | |
| OH! I forgot! I'll have that in on Saturday. Heh.... | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:39 pm | |
| heh.....? What ever! Oh, if you need like any help for an idea ask! also, we gotta get people to read this! | |
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hero2help Senior Member
Posts : 130 Join date : 2010-08-19 Location : In the all-the-time-avatar-changing land!
| Subject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:40 pm | |
| hey Zak I am going to add a title soon but i'm still working on it... I'm probably going to post the possible names soon. | |
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