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PostSubject: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyWed Sep 01, 2010 3:32 pm

so if you guys read my fan-fic which was a fail you'll know what I meant

I can't think of title but if you guys can, think of one

prologue
I woke up to the sound of sirens. My room was on fire but also.... frozen and overgrown and flooded and beaten down by rocks. "AHHHHHHH!" I decided to scream, I tried to escape but everything was blocked I tried to break the door but it it didn't budge. I looked around when my dresser fell over on my legs I fell to the ground to see the silhouette of a person with...... too hard to think.

I woke to see three things that shocked me! Okay two. A boy that looked average, a boy with with wings on him, and a girl with a broom dancing around her. This just got interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyThu Sep 02, 2010 5:53 pm

Chapter 1!

Well to find out the truth there were 4 people. the broom was held by an invisible guy! The girl then turned into me and looked at me strangely then she said "Whoa ANOTHER mimicker...." I almost screamed "Copycat!" the normal boy said "what?" she asked after she turned back. "Oh....." I said dizzily "I TOLD you this was a bad idea" the inviso-boy said. "Envy, will you SHUT UP!" the normal one said "Kane, don't make take out the knife!" he replied. "GUYS!" the winged one screamed "jeez, Jake calm down." I looked at everyone "wheres my house...my clothes...my TV....." I said in a low tone, Kane spoke up "gone."

"Well then what happened?" I asked Copycat and Envy looked at Jake "A strange radiation hit you, and now you have superpowers." I stood there blankly then I said "Yeah right, so if I think of a flood I-" then waves rushed in. "Okay maybe that was a coincidence." Copycat looked up and said "No you do and we know it, to control nature"
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyFri Sep 03, 2010 3:53 pm

I came up with a quote for this chapter
Chapter 2 "The world looks smaller once you know one another"

"Yeah right, and I'm the king of Iraq!" I said sarcastically. Jake looked at me and said "think of grass covering me" I thought for second and it happened. "Try it on Copycat or Kane" I thought about ice freezing Copycat and rain all over Kane, they both worked. "Fine, but what is you power?" I asked Kane. "I can be skilled at anything, including weapons" he said looking at Envy. He looked around then turned invisible "So, I'm guessing your power is to turn invisible?" I asked him. The air replied "And pass through anything while invisible" the he turned visible. Copycat was easy "Metamorphosis?" I asked, "Yep" she said quietly."Jake, tell me yours?" I looked at him, "Flying and to use my feather as super sharp knives."

(guys at the beginning and end of every chapter there will be a quote)

"Friendship is the biggest jewel on earth"
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySat Sep 11, 2010 10:00 am

Chapter 3 "Trust is a big word"

"So uh...you guys are like...13. I'm 11!" I looked at them, "almost 12" Envy said. "I don't care, where do I go to school?" I asked. "Uh, We don't..." Jake said quietly, "How can I trust you?!" I looked nervously.I backed up to the creaky door and said "I have to go..." I sighed and ran out the door.

Jake flew fast! I mean really fast and he caught me. "What the-" I said and squirmed out, "I just realized something..." I said "How did I get my powers?" Jake looked at me in shock and Kane and Copycat caught up. "We don't know, but thats why we have YOU" Kane pointed to me. I was so confused, I thought I was going to cry. I knew I shoudn't have in front of teens but I couldn't help it. I choked up and said "I'm a freak, no ones going to talk to me!" Envy materialized and said "So, I've been like this since I was 11,too" I looked at him. My eyes were starting to dry up, and finally said one more thing "How can I trust you?"

"Life is an endless labyrinth, you only have 3 tools. Hope, Compassion and Trust"
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySun Sep 12, 2010 9:11 am

Ok dude, this is good. But the first 3 chapters could be merged to make 1. I wouldn't mind a co-op work with you sometime, cuz you're at my level.
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySun Sep 12, 2010 1:48 pm

If you wanna, you can. I don't type long but I'm really trying to type long, but I can't stay and type for so long. So (if you get where I'm going) I'll let ya, but if you want add a character tell meh! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySun Sep 19, 2010 3:55 pm

Alright I didn't get to tell you guys but I left somewhere for a while so please Zak answer me soon!


-Hero2help
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyTue Sep 21, 2010 7:53 pm

I'll do it.
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyWed Sep 22, 2010 3:33 pm

YES!!! Start ASAP, if you can! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyThu Sep 23, 2010 6:40 pm

Prologue:


I was asleep. My room was dark, and a light breeze flew through the slightly open window. The window then shattered. I collapsed off my bed at the foot of 3 children. One kid looked average. Short, shaggy hair, t-shirt, and pajama bottoms. The other boy looked normal, except for the fact that he had falcon wings protruding from his spine, and a mask that covered his eyes. The girl wore a purple dress, high heels, and had a cute brown ponytail, and seemed to have a broom waltzing in circles around her. I glanced at the setting around me. Glass lay on the floor, and one shard stabbed in my hand. A fire burned outside, and it reached my bedroom. I couldn't think straight! What was happening?

"AAAH!" I screeched as the fire creeped closer in my direction. Then a splash of water put the whole thing out. I tilted my head, confused at what I just saw.
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyFri Sep 24, 2010 2:38 pm

Thanks.
So are you going to remake the 3 chapters I make and I make the fourth and u make the fifth?
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySat Sep 25, 2010 8:56 am

ya-huh. And I'll be adding someone in Chapter 2 of my own Wink
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySat Sep 25, 2010 9:34 am

'kay
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyThu Oct 07, 2010 3:02 pm

Zak? you there... are you done with that chapter?
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyThu Oct 07, 2010 7:55 pm

OH! I forgot! I'll have that in on Saturday. Heh....
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptyFri Oct 08, 2010 2:39 pm

heh.....?
What ever! bounce
Oh, if you need like any help for an idea ask!
also, we gotta get people to read this!
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PostSubject: Re: (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC   (since no one liked my other one) Mah NEW FAN-FIC EmptySun Oct 17, 2010 3:40 pm

hey Zak I am going to add a title soon but i'm still working on it...
I'm probably going to post the possible names soon.
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